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I have been editing your text to make it more formal and adding in a few bits to aid in readability also some formating such as bold text and bullet points. We need to sought the pictures too. | I have been editing your text to make it more formal and adding in a few bits to aid in readability also some formating such as bold text and bullet points. We need to sought the pictures too. | ||
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There is '''a lot''' of information presented within the article that has little or nothing to do with STOVL, for instance all those checklists - consider putting those in seperate articles. Also, the images are way too big and should be embedded as thumbnails. I do not mean to offend the author(s), but the article's current state is highly unreadable. -- [[User:Manny|Manny]] 13:35, 23 April 2007 (CEST) | |||
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Hi Frederf
I have been editing your text to make it more formal and adding in a few bits to aid in readability also some formating such as bold text and bullet points. We need to sought the pictures too.
Information overkill?
There is a lot of information presented within the article that has little or nothing to do with STOVL, for instance all those checklists - consider putting those in seperate articles. Also, the images are way too big and should be embedded as thumbnails. I do not mean to offend the author(s), but the article's current state is highly unreadable. -- Manny 13:35, 23 April 2007 (CEST)